and this is only the first level??
must be some kick ass with a capital kick game you got playin in your head there. Geez, just... great stuff you got here. There is one section that just features everything and is pretty loud that it just seems that melodies sorta get lost in each others harmonies. But other then that, I can't find anything else to pick on!
Keep rockin out the sweet tunes!
thx... well i have allways loved to make music, even when i didnt have fruity loops.
then i had this melodies and stuff running through my head and for many years i tried to find a program that i could use.
this melodies of mine are sometimes too simple and i think that kind of melodies gets boring fast.
i want to make something special, something unique. something people will remember for generations.
i know two melodies that i will never get tired of. "Axel F" and "Popcorn"
anyway. thx for you good words. i dont think i have made this long answer to someone before. hehe.
thx for your rating.
//PsyBotronicle Waste\\
beep beep boop beep boop!
I'll take honors on reviewing this one first. you have a very nice style and this piece shows it very well. Feels like a communist dance party in deep space. Reminds me a game I used to play on the computer Fury3. sweet game so this is a sweet track. Good work!
i think everyone should relax... to this
Certainly is chill. Mucho Bueno. Me like. I don't quite get the focus factor bit though, feels like if you wanted to put in a talking bit (or ad like that) you should have gone with something that talks about relaxation pills, sleeping pills, or weed. Woulda fit better I think. And that drum intro preceeding the "chill" bit seems misleading at first but I think it's nice. overall a sweet song. OOO, I just noticed a key change! even MORE sweet! Well, there's my 2 cents.
if you get around to it, check out my Angel Eyes!
thx for the rev. Hmm...didnt mean for the intro to be misleading. the focus factor intro was meant to represent the everyday annoyances that get on our nerves and are CONSTANT, much like infomercials.
hey yeah, ill check out your "Angel Eyes".
thanks again for el review =)
while you were cleaning???
after reading the comment to this song, I, of course, HAD to listen to it. If you really did come up with this while you were cleaning, I wanna know what kind of stuff goes through your mind while you're sitting on the back porch with a brew in your hand and the a stary night sky up above.... real chill man, I love it.
also, I thought it may be worth mentioning that initially, I heard this and instantly thought of the beginning of the phil collins song... sussio i think it was called? anyways, the drums in that I thought would be appropriate for this song. But I love it nonetheless. Great job, keep up the brilliant work.
Thanks man. I was just cleaning one day, and started thinking about like, how cool it would be to hold down a D chord on a keyboard for a while and just let some Obscured by Clouds sort of guitar thing happen.
I'm really suprised no one has picked up on the just about complete lack of consistancy in tempo. I'm glad it didn't affect people's enjoyment.
Didn't think I'd ever give a "10's across"...
I can't even express the astonishment on this side of the computer... now, I've heard some weird stuff put together before and made into "cool sounds" but never before like this. The "noises" actually made a MELODY! I've been looking for something like this for a long time and I'm glad you've done it. I've listened to it maybe 6 times now and I have to tell you, the only part I was disappointed with was how the song had to stop when I voted a big fat 5 for it! Jesus, make more of THIS!
pretty cool...
fitting title, until the drums started getting a little too fast to give it a "day-off" feel to it. Make a different version where the drums don't sound frantic and you can really call it mario's day off. But still, a pretty cool submission.
Impressive
Pretty good for guys your age. Keep playin, you guys are actually pretty good.
I have to confess, when I saw "we're all 14-15" I was thinking some horrible garage-band that would really really suck. This was a nice surprise...
hey thanks. im playing some pretty big shows now. maybe someday youll see my name around hahaha
was this song the other song slowed down?
Don't really see what the point was... was just weird... but not in a good way... maybe I just don't understand.
Just average
Nothing that stands out for me. I'm not a big fan of this type of music though, so you'll have to forgive my little bias. Just didn't stand out to me, didn't seem too outrageous. But not bad either. Interested to hear what else you'll post cause I can hear the talent is there...
Age 39, Male
Student
Columbia University
Joined on 4/29/05
First Level